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When I Dreamed Of You

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Below is the poem entitled When I Dreamed Of You which was written by poet Gilbert Esteves. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When I Dreamed Of You

I never knew our love
Will end this way.
I just pretended
You and I
Have promised of forever.
Our hearts then whispers
To be true to our promises!
We traveled far…
Shared each day nothing but love,
I cared about your feelings,
So you, too, to me!
And when the sky turns gray,
I was there for you to stay.
But then you’ve change suddenly!
And said we have to part ways.
I was hurt and nothing I can say…
That when I dreamed of you
I never thought everything
Will end this way!

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:04:00 PM
    that's my story(^_^)..thanks for sharing Gilbert...Have a nice day!

    Esteves Avatar Gilbert Esteves
    Date: 8/2/2012 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Really? I've experienced the same before also. No problem, you're always welcome.