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-CANCER-

~Cancer~

Seaweed waves upon my hair,
an empty grave in a maggots lair.
The taste of death is what I crave.
Don't forget the pretty flowers on my grave.
I sleep under a sycamore tree, 
waiting for a miracle to rescue me

My days have been out numbered,
counting every link on my chain.
My guilt will cause you pain,
for laughing at my imperfection ways.

Alive and dead in this disease body called hell.
We are now connected, in a way I'll never tell.
Now I grin at the power you can't decline.
A forever gift that will rot down your spine.

The real question in my rhyme.
Is this curse yours or mine?

by;p.d.

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:57:00 AM

    I lost 4 family members to cancer in the past 10 years.It is an unforgiving ilness.I was right about your sister and daughter who they were.It doesnt sound like either one of you is the mean one.have a good day.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Fre Verse Writers" contest P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:16:00 PM

    You are amazing dear Linda, congrats on your win!!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:46:00 PM

    This gave me shivers! Really great write. Congrats!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Much to ponder and sort thru here PD....devastatingly effective...killer last line...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Wonderful and splendid piece of work,PD. Beautiful!Congratulations on your well deserved win...XOXO...

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:17:00 AM

    well written PD ...congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:35:00 AM

    beautiful poem!!congratulations on your win friend PD...thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem..have a nice day always!! love, Maria

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:09:00 AM

    Like an arrow the last question hits my heart...... Felicitations!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:14:00 PM

    Hello, my sisie-pooh! How are you? I miss you! BIG CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SUPER WIN! I love your poem. So profound and I can feel it in my soul. Thank you so much for sharing and especially for your precious time stopping by my work leaving me your warm congratulatory and inspiring comments. I appreciate it so much! love you always, Leo

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:06:00 PM

    WARM CONGRATS PD MY BFF ON A TREMENDOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR FREE VERSE LUV .. A SUBJECT CONTENT CLOSE TO MY OWN HEART AS THE 26TH OF THIS MONTH WILL BE 4 YEARS MY MOM PASSED AWAY FROM PANCREATIC CANCER .. BFF FOREVER ..

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:26:00 PM

    I love this poem. good one babe' Nte

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:07:00 PM

    love this write read again good important subject matter xx always davidscott

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 8:44:00 AM

    you have so many good poems it hard to choose from i like the last line x david scott

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 5:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 12:46:00 AM

    Congrats on your win...much love~O.O.

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:57:00 AM

    congrats ~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 10:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest P.D.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 12:41:00 AM

    gosh, I never expected to find one I had not seen before. But this one seems new to me. You express the distaste of this vile disease so well! thanks for my win, Irma. HOw come you don't want to go by that name I first knew you by? Also I am curious how you decided on your collaboration winners? did you go by your favorites including your own poem along with theirs or strictly by their writing? Did you go maybe by the ones that inspired YOU best to respond to them? Just curious. Seemed hard!

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2011 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol.. Andrea... that is the beauty of my writes... no one,, knows what i'm talking about...
  1. Date: 8/17/2011 12:47:00 AM

    An awesom poem with a scarey message. Mybrother is currently dying from this disease in Canada.Verywell written.Crossfox

  1. Date: 8/15/2011 10:02:00 PM

    wow amazing! great job lovely rhymes

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 9:55:00 PM

    I have to say this touched me. I just lost my daughter to this horrible,self-centered disease. I think the curse is on all involved...But I will say well written..hugs

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 3:03:00 AM

    Curses visualized you see, is part of casting curses 4 ye,:) trouble is they may backfire, an then perhaps i am a liar heheh lovely comments made, by you little babe, xo, Don

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 4:18:00 PM

    powerful disease.... powerful poem. so glad that you weren't offended on my comment on your first poem since it was absolutely meant to make you laugh. and yeah size 8/9 makes me go hooray! Thanks Linda! Susan

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:27:00 PM

    this is very good nicely done. cory

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 5:37:00 AM

    A well-written, powerful poem, Destroyer Poet.

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 12:49:00 PM

    Wow p.d. this write touched my soul I have dear friend that has stage four colon cancer that has masstized to his liver and is only 34 has 3 kids and this poem brought it home.Thanks for the kind comment.~Teresa~

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 5:01:00 PM

    one heck of a well expressed poem for one hell of a disease. Packed, PD/ powerful

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 5:37:00 AM

    wow~Just wow! your work here is just so powerful. I so love this.

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 5:28:00 PM

    2 slumber under a sappy gum (tree) old ants do feed on me some.. the crows come 4 my eyes to see.. and suck em down so willingly.. hohum great macarbee visuallli thanks 4 lovely commente:) Don xox Don

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