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Dirty Wet Diaper

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                                            Dirty wet diaper
                               Sores, scabs, matted hair, crying
                                           Lady adopts_mom


Contest:"Senryu For Mom"
Sponsor:Francine Roberts



(My mother said that
when she first saw me
I had a dirty wet diaper
sores, and backed up against
her and called her mom.)

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  1. Date: 5/9/2011 1:27:00 AM

    Many congrats Sara for coveted big win in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:57:00 PM

    yup I know that must have done her in for sure! A heart throbber, Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 1:25:00 PM

    Great write for your win.......George p.s. - I was adopted, too!

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 2:02:00 PM

    Congrats my dear Sara!!!! well written and lovely...

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 1:41:00 PM

    Many congratulations on your win, Sara : )

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 12:51:00 PM

    Congratulations Sara on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 12:23:00 PM

    Congrats on a well deserved win....George

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 12:07:00 PM

    Sara, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your success with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 11:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest Sara ;)

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 10:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Sara

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 4:39:00 AM

    Amazing write Sara.Congrats on your win-kashinath

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 11:38:00 PM

    Hey, I enjoyed reading the story below the poem. Congrats on your win and this was an unusual one that I enjoyed.

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 11:03:00 PM

    i really liked tis the first time i read it, sara.. so emotive... happy cheers for the big win! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 9:14:00 PM

    Congrats Sara my friend on your special big win in Francine's contest on Mom.. terrific write .. enjoy a wonderful win.. excellent piece..luv..

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 8:57:00 PM

    Many warm congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 6:30:00 PM

    congratulations on your win.. cory

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 5:47:00 PM

    congrats on your 9th place win Sara with this true insight into what a mom is

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 10:03:00 AM

    nicely done as always. I have enjoyed it a lot..cory

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 7:23:00 AM

    Been there and done it with Diapers Sara. Thank goodness these days are behind me, if you pardon the pun. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 12:44:00 AM

    You know Francine..sometimes fewer words in a poem speaks volumes!...This is one of those..Good Job!.....SugarbearUSA

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 7:57:00 AM

    What a sweet story of how you found a loving hme, Sara : )

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 9:55:00 AM

    i tip my hat to you for these words have touched my heart too. they mention that you was adopted, and i wondered if you read my poem" adopted" which i think transcends to so many people and society. always the best to you !

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 7:40:00 AM

    Are you adopted? I had to read Carolyn Devonshire's comment to understand the poem. I think that's great - she adopted you, or you adopted her. Whatever. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 4:45:00 AM

    ohh, this tugs my heart, sara.. you filled up the page with loving gentleness in just a few words.. i'm sure you love you mom as much as she loves you... amazing with winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 1:04:00 PM

    You were lucky to find a loving home, Sara. This tribute to your adoptive mother is beautiful! Children seem to know when they are loved. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:24:00 PM

    Utterly tender Sara.. wonderful entry for the contest so full of emotion and luv. of childish innocence... and now look at u.. a grand poetess loved by so many my friend.... good luck in the contest luv..

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 4:55:00 PM

    this is very sad and so true children are abused at all ages. very well penned.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:45:00 PM

    That is terrible.. I guess neglect can happen at any age... that is what you are referring too. Right.. well enjoyed Sara, take care..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:34:00 PM

    Sharing this moment has brought a tear to my eye.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 11:45:00 AM

    tears follow this, such a sweet lady, a wonderful mom she must be so sweet, enjoyed your entry, good luck in the contest,...p.d.

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