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slowly

Slowly

you took me in, you let me go
you taught me what I need to know.
You were my friend, you were the worst
but in the end you always fixed the hurt
when I was lost, I came to you 
 though you never quite got the clue
So why can't you see what's happening,
slowly ,I'm fallin over you
slowly, I don't know what to do
slowly, im starting to think that I wont get through
slowly ,I'm fallin over you
slowly ,I'm findin what to do
slowly, you're fallin for me too 
now I don't know what to do
if you can't get a clue 
then I can't be with or without you

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  1. Date: 4/29/2011 5:02:00 PM

    Nice flow, it almost reads like a song.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:29:00 PM

    I can picture this whole thing unfolding.. Great write. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your comments with me on my poem. I love getting feed back.. Have a wonderful night Cory