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Lets cut 2 the chase 
this isn't a game,
 I'm tired of you and what u wanna play 
u say all day that u really luv me 
but I'm starting to wonder if its truth or play, 
lets cut to the chase ,this is getting in my way 
hey help me I've been waiting all day 
4 u 2 come and find the right things 2 say
 hey help me I'm not gonna wait all day 
4 u 2 come and find the right things 2 say 
dont you see i'm gonna leave  
if u cant believe in what we used to be 
why o why did you have to cheat on me 
 think where we could be 
if u werent being the new you and u told the truth 
so u better come fast
I don't wanna be rash
but u betta come fast if u wanna make it last
cuz there's only 1 thing I'm gonna say
YOUR NEVA GONNA GET ANY BETA THAN ME
u run your fingers through your hair and say u care
but im not some wear and tear teddy bear
p.s no title any suggestions?

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  1. Date: 4/26/2011 5:42:00 AM

    Thanks for your comment on Spring! No problem your not relating to the write, it's only purpose was to communicate a scense of abandon and freedom and release as we all get when it's spring, & no I wasn't trying to be ghetto LOL [though I did live in the projects in Brooklyn for a few summers] I don't relate to you speaking in text talk? We all have our likes. title suggestion No Teddy Bare