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I was thinking

How we become as one,
Thinking about how much we’ve strung.
After all I said in done,
Its seam’s you trough it wasn’t in the physical,
From I extended my hand to reach and touch you
Like smoke poof you were gone…
I took a glimpse , and a picture of you to see,
And reconcile with the feeling’s I get
When it seems you looking at me.
I heard you voice.
You show me the you care,
I pause for a minute to hear you voice again…
It’s strung at times when I think I seen you,
And hear word’s, I straight you said.
I miss you right now, even tomorrow it will be worse…

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  1. Date: 4/27/2011 10:46:00 AM

    Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Gabriel. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 12:58:00 PM

    Hola, Nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy