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Reeling

                                                Reeling from the news,
                                        Life did not turn out as planned.
                                                 It turned out better.


                                                A celebratory haiku by
                                                  Brenda Molmod Atry
                                                         4/23/2011

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:21:00 PM

    Wow. Wonderful haiku, and very celebratory indeed. Congrats on the feature.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:55:00 AM

    A haiku with an unusual twist...congratulatins on being featured.

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 8:40:00 PM

    wow, I would love to have this kind of news to be reeling from!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 5:29:00 PM

    Ok Brenda here goes;) this is not a haiku. It is a very nice short VERSE. haiku must be about nature, must be in the present tense, must be 2 parts [this is realing 1 subject] should not be caoitalized OR punctuated. BIG hugs I hope this helps, Light & Love [PS Brenda wanted a critique]

  1. Date: 4/23/2011 8:41:00 PM

    lol.. i love it... so positive... cheers to you.. .. I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.