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all in love

i heard the sound 
 the sound of nail and hammer
the nail piercing through his flesh
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound 
the scourging sound of thistle
it went thorugh his skull with gushing out of his blood
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound 
the sound of shouts
the critics,soldiers were raising their voices to be heard
and they were heard 
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound
it was coming from my inside
it said 'dont deny me' but i did 
i ran from them and from him
then he looked at me
all in love

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  1. Date: 4/22/2011 9:38:00 AM
    It was all worth the love... what he gave for us... enjoyed your poem.. David, have a blessed day... Linda