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Morning Massacre

A rainstorm in the morning helps to wash away the night,
a rainbow seems to promise that this day will turn out right.
Our feathered friends all gathering in search of morning treat,
could anything go wrong today?  Just look below your feet.

Wonderful for all who greet this frenzy with delight,
to watch the pretty birds catch worms, oh what a lovely sight!
For as the waters seeps below we worms rise one by one
and try to seek a ‘safer’ place dried by the morning sun.

Heavy rain is death to us, it creates a muddy sea
of sodden soil, a watery grave for those who can’t get free.
But terror hangs above our home as birds all flock around,
they know that we have got no choice, we’ll be their killing ground.

Before our heads have seen the light their beaks begin to tear,
they rip my family into shreds before they get ‘their’ air.
This feast is at our fatal cost, our numbers dwindle down,
if only we weren’t forced to rise from safety underground.

Today I was the lucky one, the one they never caught,
I’ll live to squirm another day alone with life and thought.
To live my days in solitude, to have no friends around,
and still to face the terrors of that ‘pitter patter’ sound.

So if you’re happy with your friends but feel that you are down,
unless you’re ‘forced’ to rise above the place that you have found,
it’s safer to accept your lot for sometimes you can’t see,
the place you struggle to achieve could leave you alone… like me.

Ivor G Davies.


(A Family Crisis?)

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  1. Date: 4/26/2011 11:50:00 AM
    Excellent....Ivor....Excellent

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest Ivor. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 11:26:00 AM
    Congrats Ivor on your HM in the Crisis contest with this excellent entry luv.. Judy said u would be posting more and more intricate poems and she was correct.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 6:24:00 AM
    He got "Betty Davis Eyes"

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:25:00 PM
    Outstanding. Awesome read. I really like the vivid image references. Nice story line, good flow. Well Done!