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Touch Me- Dusk

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Touch Me- Dusk




   Dusk,
   I  walk
   thro' the woods
   swirling   whiteness,
   thick  blanket  of   mist ;
   cold ,  it  touches  my  skin.
   my   fingers   reach   out   to   feel
   the  delicate   white  petals  wrapped
   oh!  so  fragile ,  white  bunches  in  green;
   smell   sweet  ,    the   wild   lilies -  of - the - valley.

   I  pick   some   flowers,  a  sound   startles  me,
   forest  with  its  tall  dark  trees  scary.
   a  rustle   behind   me,   I  see
   a  deer  leaps  across  my  path
   fades  in the thickets  green.
   hear   trees  whispering
   frozen   I   stood.
   been touched by
   the dark
   woods.


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5th place in the contest
For the Contest : "Touch me count up and down"
Sponsored by nette onclaud


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  1. Date: 4/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

    soupmail!

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 8:12:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Gautami. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 12:01:00 PM

    Congratulations Gautamion your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 9:27:00 PM

    This I can relate to for I truly have a fear of walking under big old trees! And this reminds me of that fact! Brillianly written etheree, congratulations

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 6:34:00 PM

    Love your descrption of the deer startling you.. congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 11:24:00 AM

    This is a gem of a poem!!Congrats Gautami on your another big win---kash

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 9:54:00 AM

    I knew this would be a winner, Gautami. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 9:51:00 AM

    just lovely, congrats on your win in the contest Gautami

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 7:38:00 AM

    Many congrats, Gautami: )

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 5:59:00 AM

    forest with its tall dark trees scary, such a lovely image. Many warm congrats,

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 4:53:00 AM

    Congrats Gautami on your super win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry my friend... great words.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem luv..

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 3:13:00 AM

    Congrats, Gautami! Enjoyed this one too-- so many beautiful ones on dusk and this one I really liked, thanks for taking us there with you in the woods at dusk!

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 6:53:00 PM

    Congratulation Gautami on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 9:47:00 AM

    Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Gautami. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 3:47:00 PM

    soup mail, asap! :)

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 10:19:00 PM

    Yipeee ...Thanks to PS for my featured poem and thanks to all my friends here,you all are darlings.Happy Easter.Luv and huggs,gautami

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 7:53:00 AM

    Congrats Gautami on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a contest entry too.. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 6:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 2:00:00 PM

    TO MY FAVs......Happy Easter! Hippity Hoppity! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 1:59:00 PM

    Nette is surely gonna read this one a few times over...shaking her head that this contest has brought forth such eloquent writes. This truly moves me on this rainy Easter day! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 9:48:00 AM

    Loved this one - excellent : )

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 10:41:00 AM

    Beautifully written, Gautami. I felt like I was right there with you walking through the woods. You brought everything to life in your words. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:47:00 AM

    How creative and stunning, I love it! best of luck in the contest. and thanks for your lovely comments on my poetry~~

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 6:45:00 PM

    Oh...I love this walk in the woods....enchanting....with deer to make it even more so...lovely!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 4:38:00 PM

    NICELY done!! I think you accomplished what she wanted with your imagery!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 1:59:00 PM

    beautiful write on the theme, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 10:06:00 AM

    nice! best of luck in the contest