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  1. Date: 4/28/2011 9:37:00 PM
    This poem didn't place in the contest? I still think it is fantastic. Hey, I now remember your "Hello" introduction in the forums. Remember? Aren't you still a teenager? If you keep at writing like this and practice, you are going to kick all the old fogey's asses by the time you are older lol.

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Wonderful poetry Manouchka ! Last stanza is so well written .Just beautiful. Anne

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 2:26:00 PM
    Heya Manouchka. This is a great dedication to the sun for sure. You did really well with this form. If this is for the contest, I believe it is supposed to be labelled as 'Etheree'. I know, I many rules. Just giving you a heads up.

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 12:02:00 AM
    This is very nice, Manouchka. If it's for that one contest, I believe you need to do a reversed one as well, going from ten syllables down to one!