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Birds of a Feather

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Birds of a Feather

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                             A  bird  takes  off  on  its  wings  to  fly,
                             As  a  kite  goes  past  in  the  clear  sky.
                                         And  they  watch  each  other...
                                    Birdie  says,  "You've  got  brother,
                             A  string  attached  to  your  tail, O boy!"




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5th place in the contest
For Brian Strand's contest : "Five Lines Down"

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  1. Date: 6/12/2011 2:13:00 PM

    oh silly one LOL Congrad's on your winning perspective! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 9:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 4:03:00 AM

    Yes disturbed bird a kite absurd observed good one mate Don

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:57:00 PM

    congratulations on your win, Gautami

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 12:42:00 AM

    I remember this one. I loved it!! Congrats. Glad to see it won.

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 1:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, gautami

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:56:00 PM

    Congrats Gautami on your super win in Brian's contest with this dynamic poem.. enjoy my friend and view my new blog today about new poets...u are named luv..

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 2:02:00 PM

    Guatami- This is fairy TALE-like! Love your creativivty! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 4:46:00 PM

    Cute poem! Even without a descripton of the bird or a kite, I can see/hear it happening in my mind. The end is so funny!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 8:29:00 AM

    Very funny, Gautami! If this is for Francine's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 2:58:00 PM

    Gautami, say "O my!" then you will have the rhyme you need with fly and sky! Cute one! (hmmm, then that loses the brother/boy joke)! oh well!! STill cute.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:36:00 PM

    Frolicsome and playful write, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:32:00 PM

    hahaha. Good one, Gautami. I enjoyed reading this ditty.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:04:00 PM

    a poem that plays a gentle tune, gautami... much enjoyed; wel-scribed! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:58:00 AM

    this poem has a playful nature.. i would've never associated birds of a feather with what you turned it into so kudos to you