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Union

Union,
Strong harmony
Needing strenuous effort
Furthermore bursting our heart
Perfect …



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  1. Date: 5/6/2011 4:44:00 PM

    Very interesting. Good read.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 6:06:00 AM

    Desiree excellent poem . Like the way you think. Anne

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 4:28:00 PM

    apparently all is needed to strive to perfection ...... thought inducing poem, Desiree. Thank you for your comment

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 8:27:00 AM

    Maintaining that harmony does require much effort, Desiree. Excellent cinquain! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:13:00 AM

    Very good..!!!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 2:42:00 AM

    A beautiful write, Desiree ;)

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:37:00 PM

    Wonderful images conveying Union

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 10:00:00 AM

    just beautiful, so warm and tender. thank you for commenting on Grandma's Rocking chair.