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  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:16:00 AM
    Vow ! Father, be it biological or be it spiritual .... HE is the one who leads selflessly. Thanks for visiting my work,'Turned down heaven' and commenting on same. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:43:00 AM
    Many metaphors in this piece to instill the emotion in the reader of the plight of the writer.. glorious ending Manouchka and HE is the only ONE to follow my friend.. HIS WAY is endless and loving.. may u enjoy choicest blessings this Easter Season..luv..

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 11:33:00 PM
    I find two ways to take this one, Manouchka. It's very thought provoking!

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 6:45:00 PM
    a good piece of light poetry, enjoyed reading