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Soul mates

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Soul mates

Two souls drawn to each other, that was fate
Attracted by the so-called force called lust
Magnetization of two scents, this was great
There was a time when love was not a must
You and I were just running away from hate
While others were searching out for dust
Constantly looking for a romantic mate

At first driven by our sexual appetite, haunted
We were so strong and unexplainably wonderful
Weeks went by, we got emotionally bonded
Months elapsed, we simply became faithful
Deeply sincere with our hearts, we collided
Our hearts exploded freeing butterflies, blissful
We became one and our selves are forever tied

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  1. Date: 5/12/2011 12:14:00 AM

    Beautiful poetry. Thank you for dropping in. Love, vie.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:12:00 PM

    Hi... D.M., so tell me are you and your soulmate still one... I sure hope so.... I had a soulmate... but right now we are not so soul together... but we still talk and look for one another... well for me its just lust now... enjoyed your poem take care... Linda

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 3:24:00 PM

    Desiree, ' Our hearts exploded freeing butterflies' A beautiful poetic line .love it .Anne

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 9:55:00 AM

    The emotional bonding supercedes the sexual appetite in long-term relationships, Desiree. Sounds like you truly have your soul mate! So happy for you. Hope the bliss lasts a lifetime. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:18:00 AM

    Insightful thoughts here. Real love goes beyond lust. Enjoyed the read !!

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 8:22:00 AM

    aww that is very sweet.. but maybe better in more verses?? I liked it a lot...it really paints a picture of a type of love that is more then intimacy..

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 7:31:00 PM

    I love this poem very much!! ....7

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 5:14:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive of mating of two who love each other..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and the kind review of my work..Sara