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Picking up the pieces

I feel betrayed, even with the love we made
it never really mattered to you
How could you leave, and burden me
with all this pain I now bare
Didn't it matter, that I loved you with all of my heart and soul?
That I cried with you, took strides with you, would have died for you?
I guess that didn't count for anything of importance.
Now I'm left with nothing but regret.
Not because I loved you, but because I gave you my heart
The part that I can't ever get back
They say that parting is such sweet sorrow, that tomorrow hope begins anew
I can attest that there is nothing sweet about you leaving, and you saying we're 
through
I'll pick up the pieces, and carry on like I always do
But just remember/Baby, a part of me is always with you.


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  1. Date: 4/25/2011 7:07:00 AM

    Sad and heartbreaking but you conveyed your feelings very well R.M. Anne.

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 6:37:00 PM

    very sad and emotional, but a great piece...

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 8:32:00 AM

    Very nice, I felt the sadness in the words with this one.

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 10:29:00 AM

    enjoyed reading this one, a great piece.