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Dark gooey puddle

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Dark gooey puddle

Are you feeling befuddled, 
or slightly bemuddled?
Does it feel like you’re standing in a dark gooey puddle?
Leap out of that hole, 
and fling off your boots!
Climb up that tree, 
and gobble down fruits.
I see you there smiling, 
perched way up high, 
free as a bird, 
bright sun in the sky.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2012 9:23:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem very much and congrats..Patrick