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Is My Brother for Real

Is my brother for real?
He kicks and he bites.
He wets his bed
And starts terrible fights.

He picks his nose-
Can he be my kin?
Or is my brother...
An alien?

by Cherie Durbin

Written for Debbie Guzzi's "Real, UNreal and SURreal" contest. On the theme 
of "real".

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  1. Date: 5/1/2011 11:01:00 PM

    this is terribly cute. heehee. (about that alien brother!!)

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 3:32:00 PM

    sounds almost like me and my sister when i was a kid. really enjoyed this piece of creative poetry you penned.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 6:21:00 AM

    This is adorable! I am the youngest of 9 children. I have six older brothers and always wanted a little brother. After reading this, I guess I should be thankful! lol! ~ Ellen