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hello hello hello

Hello hello hello
Can you see me?
Darling please
Just look at me

Did you forget?
What we had
Did you forget?
That I am yours? 

Months ago, just a few a years ago
I thought we were friends forever
Now days ago, just a few hours ago
I was forced too let it all just go

You me took me in
Forgave my sins
Then broke me down
Until I was fragmented 

You didn’t give a thought
To the strength inside my heart
You were weakness pulling me
I was alone, and I almost caved in

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  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:21:00 AM
    i was held here in suspense, crystal.. got more?? a beauty! :) huggs, nette