My Love by Gautami Phookan

My Love

~ My Love, His eyes melting Me with his gaze, drawn to Him my soul, hearts entwined forever. Divine. My Life, His smile holds me In a daze, makes me dance Under snowflakes, heart stops beating. Blessed. ~~ For the "Traditional Cinquain Contest" Sponsored by Catie Lindsay


Manouchka doreus Date: 4/18/2011 5:06:00 PM good luck and God bless
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/17/2011 11:37:00 AM Oh, the reader can really feel the passion in this wonderful cinquain, Gautami! I was in a daze when I first met my late husband. Your poem reminded me of how I felt when we met. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
Joyce Johnson Date: 4/16/2011 6:06:00 PM Yes it is althoug in some words it is only one. Nice poem. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Joycej
Sara Kendrick Date: 4/16/2011 3:32:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this wonderful work that reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Constance La France Date: 4/16/2011 7:34:00 AM It is just beautiful," I love it. " Best of luck in the contest. And thanks for your comments on my poetry~~
Emma Mantle Date: 4/16/2011 7:34:00 AM This is a beautifully done cinquain. You've conveyed so much emtion. Best wishes in the contest, this is a sure winner! (makes me think i should have done a love one instead!!) Em :)
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 4/16/2011 6:04:00 AM I am now mesmerized Gautami bu the loveliness of this creative poetry .. breathtaking lines of deep love and being blessed at the end is the treasure ..good luck in the contest my friend.. definitely a winner .. making it a new fav...
Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2011 6:48:00 PM Just wonderful, Gautami. How nice that line "under snowflakes!"
Annalise Brigham Date: 4/15/2011 10:44:00 AM Words from the heart will not be denied, Gutami. Beautiful and very romantic! I enjoyed reading this and best wishes for a definite win in Catie's Contest! Love, Annalise
nette onclaud Date: 4/15/2011 9:36:00 AM thumbs up for such an ispiring, lilting piece, guatami... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
Gautami Phookan Date: 4/15/2011 9:23:00 AM Thanks Jimmy for liking this,best wishes to you, Gautami
Gautami Phookan Date: 4/15/2011 9:18:00 AM Thanks Dr Ram. Andrea love means the same things to us I feel.Being somewhat similar, didn't want to enter this; tried a sad theme, but my heart would come back to this.And after this another one wouldn't form,so... Love to you, Gautami
Jimmy Anderson Date: 4/15/2011 9:15:00 AM Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/15/2011 9:02:00 AM Lovely expressions on life and love, Gautami

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