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Park Sand

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Park Sand

Winds blow sand through the park and crystal grains fly
Sand castles built by two small hands forming it
Kids laughing and sliding down big and small slides
Sand pails with shovels filling them with sand

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  1. Date: 4/15/2011 1:15:00 PM
    thanks dear..yeah good weekend planned..sibling sabbath saturday,,wrote a haiku while out playing...

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM
    now when she walks around the corner of the street, the street the park is on LOL as she sees the little people in the park she is waving already saying " I'm here, my name is >>>>I am a girl! Hello I am here" ROFL

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM
    she is waving down the street yelling " I am here now" LOL the tears of laughter..what a dollie...

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:46:00 AM
    yeah it was gorgeous outside...cool breeze but nice..we are out several times a day...plus it helps with nightie night her newest line "going to see my people" oh goodness what a laugh..going to the park to see my people

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 9:39:00 PM
    Truly lovely--I can see the two of you :-) It was nice today, wasn't it? I think this is my new favourite.

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 5:37:00 PM
    oh thanks yeah...love the trips to the park...thanks alot...thought I would convert the lantern into more then one verse..

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 4:22:00 PM
    Really, really nice poem a lot of great images here. I can see myself in that park.