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Sunlight and Rain: The Prism of an Anarchist

These are the confessions of an Anarchist,

when I

stepped away from the light,
entering the shadows
of forbidden caverns-
the caves, tunnels 
and catacombs of anarchy.

Here        a constant, cold caress
of moisture,
a never-ending inner rain,
trickling,
pooling alongside lonely thoughts.

Nothing would grow so deep underground,
not even fungus, nor moss.
Survived on sheer will and dampness,
lungs mutated into gills-
eyes became accustomed
to this eternal night.

Mission lost in translation and transmission,
a rogue satellite orbiting
through the space of thin air,
cut-off from other agents of anarchy-
slithering along corridors of lost souls,
feeding on regurgitated thoughts
and drowned dreams of cities burning down,
melting like hot candle wax.
How I wanted the cities above to burn!
To burn down into the ground
in waves of rolling thunder and lightning.

Couldn't differentiate between night and day,
weeks gave birth to months,
in a C-section of fleeting years.

Somehow        I stumbled upon a side entrance,
felt warmth pushing in,
pushing down,
and my will shattered apart,
dashed into a million shards.

Sunlight!

As I broke the surface,
light seared my tightly shut eyes,
breaching eyelids with ease.
The pain felt wonderful,
changing into a delirious exultation
and heated comfort,
thawing out frozen, stiff bones.

Rays of sunlight rippled across my skin,
evaporating the slimy musk of caverns,
burning me on the outside,
cleansing me from the inside.
Eventually        I was able to keep my sore eyes open,
ready to sizzle and explode from sensory overload,
globules floating through my vision.

The first thing I saw
was not close up        magnified,
but the distant horizon enveloped in a halo
of lemon haze        arching between two mountain peaks.
I wept,
skin buzzing from the heat of the sun.

Yes, 
how sunlight changes the perspective of nightmares,
revealing the true colours of things,
balancing the darkness within-
bending drops of lost hope
into a prismatic ribbon of brilliance and prayer,
always,

        always evading the deep-rooted catacombs below,
a place I will choose to forego,
only entering within memories,
until even these are burned away by sunlight,
until even these are cleansed by sunlight.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2012 1:52:00 PM

    500 plus reads, I couldn't resist. Glad I read this DeeP piece that reminds me of one of my favorite words "Juxtaposed". A TooL word. I got you on my favorite poet list. It is a short list. Keep bringing the FunK, The Smile, The Pain, the Everything words can bring.

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 8:54:00 PM

    Good luck with this in the big contest. My kind of poetry.

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 4:31:00 PM

    A profound and very moving piece of fine art my friend. We do need that sunlight and I love your deep message and skilled verses. Your pensive pen is working marvels...Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!

  1. Date: 7/1/2011 10:43:00 AM

    Sent you canned soup ;)

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 8:08:00 AM

    hey there ^_^ -- see I am all smiles? sunny smiles (ok night time over here now, umm moony? starry? smiles instead ^_^) Thanks for your nice comments there & :p that was what I was feeling at the moment that day (if you notice I wrote that in about 5 mins & was written earlier this month)--not sure how to say it? but it is kind of cool that you were able to relate to it-- I guess we all have those days/moments? well continue being in a good mood, ok? be sparkly! ^_^

    P.iNk Avatar binibining P.iNk Date: 5/24/2011 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    btw not sure if you read my reply in mail? or you slept through it? snorezzz-- I was asking you whether it was raining there? do you need it to rain there? but you probably don't want it to rain, lol--you mentioned something that it was sunny there already...over here we got sunny days & rainy nights-- 0_o
  1. Date: 5/5/2011 7:41:00 PM

    Very expressive with superior imaging. Thank you for the read.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Chris. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 3:49:00 PM

    Wow, This is goooooooooooood. Why you, two timing no good for nothing woman stealer,hehe so you the Chris that got me hot. If I were a woman that would be ok. Just kiiding friend I was just throwing me love around and I have a soft spot for her. Can I say that? may be it's not hehe. No It's you I love Chris hehe

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 11:34:00 AM

    Congratulations Chris on your big win in the contest.Enjoyed your beautiful poem---kashinath

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 10:06:00 PM

    Chris some of the most magnificient images in this write. Heartiest congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 5:43:00 AM

    yikes cool "c-section of fleeting years" great line & "globules floating through my vision" OH "prismatic ribbon of brilliance" [me anarchist too, laws make criminals ;), good people are good, bad are bad?/change is possible but NOT through law] Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 2:33:00 AM

    Hey there Chris!! Am I allowed to say I told you so? Lol Congratulations on your awesome win, see I knew this one would do it!! ;) enjoy your day Mr. Dash :D

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:28:00 PM

    whhhoa, clapping for you chris.. abstract poetry reigns as no.1! .. a round of congrats to you! yeahhhhhh! ,,:) hugggs

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 6:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on you well deserved first place win with this wonderful write. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:52:00 PM

    what did I tell you, chris. I knew this would win top spot!

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:51:00 PM

    Congrats on winning!

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Chris

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 1:00:00 PM

    Many congrats on getting the number one spot : )

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:54:00 PM

    Very cool title you got for this one, Chris :) congrats again-- was finally able to send that soupmail O_o

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:30:00 PM

    Congrats Chris on your super first place win in Sunlight contest luv.. ..exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy...

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:21:00 PM

    I am not surprised to see this compelling poem rise to the top !! Powerhouse of poetry this is!! Congratulations to a most gifted poet ...you are top notch!

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:49:00 AM

    Wow, great one and congrats on your win. I got claustrophobic reading this one.I was glad to get to the light...BG

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:41:00 AM

    This is already saved to my favorite list. I knew it would top the winners circle. Just amazing, Chris. many congrats on your first place win. Lainie

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:32:00 AM

    Congrats Chris, I told you , you were a great poet...

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 10:46:00 AM

    Wow Chris, this one is just rich & loaded :D! This honestly floored me, I totally just loved this-- the contrast that you used here worked perfectly in highlighting sunlight-- this was just so vivid-- your talent definitely shows here, mister-- your take on the challenge was fantastic, so unique & gripping, and how you ended this was just wow! That part where you describe the horizon was perfect-- Super congrats to you! soupmail later on about your prize- way to go!! & definitely a fave ^_^

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 10:10:00 AM

    A beautifully expressive poem. It had to be a winner. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:13:00 AM

    A compelling story from darkness to light. Very interesting write Chris. Enjoyed this wonderful poem. Yes, we have a lot of flooding in Sask. but no we have none in Regina. Within an hour of here we have flooding to the east, west and north. We had so much moisture last year that it was still on top of the land when snow arrived. We had more snow last night. Spring is not coming early. Thanks for asking. Phyl

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 10:17:00 AM

    Hi Chris, thanks for your comment. I am a pacifist and abhor war, but if our country is going to send young people off to fight I do believe they deserve our respect. Remember the Woodstock song about "be the first one on your block to have your son come home in a box." Dark satire, but definitely something I'll not forget. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 7:37:00 AM

    And Lucifer looked around in Hell and said, "How awfully beautiful Hell is!" I wonder if he too will weep when finally released from his subterranean prison? I enjoyed your poem Chris and found it most interesting. You are definitely unique my friend which makes you a precious stone!

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 6:52:00 AM

    Hi again, just to let you know I abused your dash idea for a poem, hope you don't mind lol :D

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