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The Kiss of Spring

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The Kiss of Spring



.                                          T ulips coated in dewy waxen gloss
                                           U ndulating their warm fragrant breath 
                                           L eaving -  that cold hearted Mr. Frost
                                           I n a
                                           P uddle of tears
                                           S creaming - Spring is here!

                                                           ~~~~~

                                                            Elaine George

                                            Written:  April 11, 2011
                                            For: Carol Brown's contest - Spring Flowers
                                            Awarded:  First Place

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  1. Date: 5/11/2011 11:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win of this superbe write! Enjoyed the great imagery. Spring has arrived at our neighbour's across the road, Elaine. They got tulips at the same time we got our dandelions. The lilac and peonies will take their time. Blah blah blah.....:) Have a great day!! Mikki

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 6:00:00 PM

    this is very nice good job! cory

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 6:25:00 AM

    congratulations. I am glad you won with this awesome little poem!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 11:41:00 AM

    Tis great to see you at the top Elaine, with this worthy hit, in first place. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:47:00 AM

    Dear Lainie, Congratulations on your top place win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:28:00 AM

    Many congrats on your 1st place, Lainie : )

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:14:00 AM

    Congrats Elaine on your 1st place win with this beautiful write on tulips.Love,Gautami

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 5:18:00 AM

    I love the screaming part in New England it has been SO dark and chill still only 2 days days of sun, I'm beginning to think maybe if I'm in Seattle I may as well move there? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 3:38:00 AM

    A great write laine. Many congrats on your win. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:40:00 PM

    soo unique! BEST CHEERS FOR THE HIGH win, lainie! :) huggs

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 8:51:00 PM

    Laine this is enchanting. Super congratulations all the way.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 8:34:00 PM

    Very clever..congrats on your big win with this great write. Bg

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on your first place win in the contest with this beautiful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 2:04:00 PM

    Congrats on this well written, well deserved 1st Place win, Elaine. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 1:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in the contest - waiting patiently for my tulips to bloom here. Loved your poem.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 1:16:00 PM

    Very cleverly done Elaine. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 1:11:00 PM

    Congraulations on the first place win in the contest, Elaine

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:49:00 PM

    Congrats Lainie on your first place win in Carol's contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 12:36:00 PM

    Congratulations Lainie on your winning placement in my Flowers of Spring contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:44:00 PM

    Oh to see the Tulip fields in Holland, like rainbows on the land. Colourful Acrostic Elaine. Have a lovely weekend ....:)

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:12:00 PM

    Good luck in Carol's contest, Elaine. This poem reads like a winner!

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 8:16:00 AM

    A lovely one on tulips.loved Mr Frost part in tears..Good Luck in the contest.Love, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 5:19:00 PM

    Goodbye, Mr. Frost, and welcome to the joy of spring! Tulips are so lovely, Lainie! Great entry for Carol's contest. Best wishes for success. Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 10:42:00 PM

    Wonderful personification in this acrostic. I love it, Lainie!! Gosh, I hope I can do as well with this one. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 8:19:00 PM

    Breathtaking Acrostic Lainie and good luck in this contest by Carol.. we have yellow tulips in our front porch lawn.. awesome sight.. super imagery in every line flowing into the next luv.. amazing as always your poetry moves me ...

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 2:02:00 PM

    a great Acrostic, love Tulips. as i did this piece you wrote. so creative. good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 1:58:00 PM

    originality at its best, lainie.. enjoyed the first line that led to a fab ending :) winning wishes to you... hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 1:25:00 PM

    Nice personfication of the flower and frost, Elaine. Good luck in the contest