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TEMPTATION

I see this perfect moon-lit night
with million heart-shaped stars in sight
ill-clad with none but drooping leaves
a fig-tree fraught with a disease
its beauty once majestic spoilt
in battle lost ‘gainst arid soil 

Against all odds with all its might
a lone fig struggling to the light
I near the tree with footsteps sure
and marvel at perfection pure
a beauty of blue-blooded type
abstained for years I match its ripe

Then common sense lets turmoil in
footsteps once sure now uncertain
like Eve had been that first aeon 
I’m gripped twixt hard rock and a stone:
like angels do, with caution tread
or foolishly go right ahead?

I gaze to heav’n the slightest while
a star winks with the merest smile
I wink back once, fig’s beauty draws
no human born without its flaws
entranced, I reach to nature’s art
a softness settles in my heart

I’m awestruck by my juicy dish
on first bite I will make a wish
I pare my find with great aplomb
perfection glows within its womb
I wish upon my luscious feast
well soon I too would be deceased

The love was pure twixt you and me
from knee-high way past puberty
your final gift bore on bent knee
aware your last meal it would be
our fig we shared with great delight
first you, then me, alternate bites

Heart’s softness hardens, deeply torn
a lone tear in each eye is born
they multiply, become yet more
in memory of our days of yore
this perfect fig brought none but pain
no fig will pass my lips again

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:57:00 AM

    This is very moving, I hope you overcame the pain and once again ventured to the Majestic tree.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:49:00 AM

    Just browsing through your talented poetry and came across this.. what an expressive and descriptive write. Reminds me of my poem "Good Intentions"

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Delysia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Congratulations fantastic win :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:22:00 AM

    congrats delysia on a tremendous win for this exciting entry so dynamic luv ..

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:05:00 PM

    My daughter just returned from South Africa and really loved it there. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 7:52:00 PM

    Delysia, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:48:00 AM

    A stunning poem here Delysia.You have maintained a perfect 8 syllables per line throughout the poem.Love this!!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 3:59:00 AM

    Congratulations Delysia I envy you your languages skills as well as your writing skills.xx

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:14:00 PM

    congrats on your win Delysia

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Delysia, congratulations, in Joyce's favorite contest... good night~ PD

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Well I would never have guessed that Engilish is your second language Delysia. This is marvelous and the rhyme and meter is flawless. I am sure that I gave the edge to rhyme poems as that is what I write in as a rule but this did not even need the rhyme to win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:03:00 PM

    congrats delysia on having this poem make it to first round competition in PS contest luv..G.L..miss u..much..

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 6:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Delysia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 8:49:00 AM

    An imaginative write. Some nice poetic phrases and altogether an interesting read.

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 8:43:00 PM

    Delysia, I see this must have been entered in one of pd's contests and done really well. Congratulations then. And I really enjoyed this one. You should label its form as personification or analogy Something like that. A deep poem! Great ending! And I enjoyed your little ditty about waist watchers. Where are you anyway? In the states?

    hendricks Avatar delysia hendricks Date: 6/7/2011 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind comment. I know a big fat nothing about poetry forms. I just rhyme and hope for the best. lol. I'm assuming you're from the States. I'm a born-and-bred Capetonian from sunny South Africa, which is not quite living up to its name right now. I had me a good chuckle reading your "Waist Watchers". Clever and witty title, too. :))
  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:44:00 AM

    congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 3:28:00 AM

    Congrats Delysia on your glorious win with this awesome write. love dear, gautami

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 9:42:00 PM

    D. Hendricks, really , ~ CONGRATULATIONS a 100 times!! In my contest, and thanks for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. also I see a new favorite poet of mine here... and as soon as my contest slow down.. i will stop and enjoy your poetry.... take care,. have a great one,.. Poet D.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 3:39:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., delysia

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 12:58:00 PM

    This is simply superb poetry, Delysia. Wot a strong ending too. Hey, you so deserve a win with this~!

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 11:59:00 AM

    Wow what a very vivid write this is-- bittersweet yet also beautifully written! Super congrats on your win Delysia :)

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 8:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Delysia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 8:15:00 AM

    oh yeah delysia congrats on a super win in this contest of inspiration luv.. enjoy top billing..wow..

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 7:50:00 AM

    Wonderful inspirational write here delysia.Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 6:48:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS for your great win... so inspired with your words of heart... ***jun-jun

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Delysia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 12:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Delysia

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:42:00 AM

    Excellent write with images that mirror the poets soul.... you are a "True Poet"... thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart...luv Michael

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 8:46:00 PM

    I love the last line "no fig will pass my lips again" original. you have a good way of capturing the essence and embodying it with full flowery meaning. I hope that makes sense and not just me madness seeping through. :-) More please!!!!

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