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The Elephant Fort

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The Elephant Fort

Black beauties in chains-
Before the ticket counters,
A long queue does creep
To scatter near the black wonders.

Ears and tails always move,
Ruminating the rhythms of forest.
Elephants are inside the fort,
Exposed to the sky barest.

I hear the hushed emotions
In the clinking of chains.
Hearts  smoulder in;
Eyes emit lava of pains.

Burning red wild flowers
And tickling streams,
Each elephant longs I know:
But chains kill dreams.


(Anakotta(a fort for the elephants) at Punathur, Guruvayur, Kerala,India is a tourist 
place, where you see a large number of elephants together. All are chained.)

First place winner in 'Your(own) Favorite Poem' contest by Destroyer A poet(PD) 

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  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:42:00 AM
    It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Fab. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 6:38:00 AM
    Really it was wonderful which I had missed. Thanks God reminded me to read this yours. Wish you Sweet Happy Christmas day and Happy New Year 2012. bl

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 8:58:00 AM
    oooo! I'm Sorry FAB,,,, i called you BOB,,, i don';t know why i called you bob... Is it okay to call you FAB,,, for short... or is there another short name.. i can initial you with if you don't how about bob...kidding..kidding... sorry i woke up in a good spirit...xooxox,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 8:19:00 AM
    Dear Bob, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 2:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 12:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place win. I too, love elephants and actually collect statues and carvings of elephants. I have about 40 different ones. It is a great poem, no wonder it is your favourite. Lee

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 11:46:00 PM
    Thanks to all who supported and encouraged me.

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 6:39:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on a first place win with this excellent entry my friend.. awesome ..luv..

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 5:08:00 PM
    a sad state of affairs! congrad's light & Love

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 3:35:00 PM
    Tremendous a well deserved top of tree placing.. blessings from Paul.

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 2:26:00 PM
    Great work. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 12:42:00 PM
    A very stirring write. Congratulations on your first place win. Well done

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 12:23:00 PM
    Congratultions on the first place win in the contest of P.D., Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 8:55:00 AM
    Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 10:42:00 AM
    "Ears and tails always move, Ruminating rhythms of forest." "Each elephant longs I know: But chains kill the dreams." Powerful lines...loved it! CR

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 5:44:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 3:17:00 PM
    Wow,you were very inspired and wrote an excellent poem, Fabiyas! Maybe one for the big soup contest!

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 12:21:00 PM
    Your poem made me feel so sad Fabiyas. Animals deserve to roam in the wild. You described the elephants' plight so well. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:35:00 AM
    Fabiyas, I hate to think of elephants (or any other animals) in chains. No wonder their "eyes emit lava of pains." A sad but beautifully written poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:23:00 AM
    This must be such a sight to behold, Fabiyas and I can't help but feel for those elephants-- that must be sad to see as well though-- thank you for sharing and for your inspiring comment in my poem :)