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Rythm of Love

                                       La portée pour ma main, 
                                 marchez Toujours à côté de moi, 
                                    ne laissez jamais-moi passer,
                                       Écoutez mon coeur battu, 
                                      au rythem de notre amour.


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                                             Reach for my hand, 
                                          Always walk beside me, 
                                              Never pass me up, 
                                         Listen to my heart beat, 
                                        To the rythem of our love.
 
                                             *~Miranda Lambert~*
                                                         4/9/11


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  1. Date: 4/13/2011 6:12:00 AM

    Sweet write Miranda and luv the two tone presentation with French and English luv.. so want to say thankxx for my HM for "Bad Girls".. I am very honored that u liked my entry and awarded it this honor. .. it was truly a fun contest to enter.. am working on your current contest entry now.. my youngest son is in the military so am going to write it from his point of view even though he was not around for the Vietnam conflict ... good luck with your new one luv..

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 9:31:00 PM

    a great write, so touching and warm.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 12:16:00 PM

    Miranda, my sister had some suggestions for the French translation. I'll send you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:15:00 AM

    Hearing it .. feeling it Randa Bear and it is perfection luv.. do u give French lessons??? enjoy the two part write ..one in French and one in English...either language is exudes luv..luv..

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 6:39:00 PM

    Very nice poem on the "rhythm" of love, Randa. Dr. Ram's right about the spelling, but few people spell this word correctly. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 1:39:00 PM

    lovely poem, and I am going to challenge you, soup mail~~

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 9:01:00 AM

    Romantic and lovely expression, (Typo rythm) Miranda

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 6:29:00 AM

    Beautiful!!! Just Beautful