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One Way

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One Way

For you I was always there,
I never left your side.
But the second I need you,
You seem to just hide.

Were you pretending to care?
Just passing me by?
Did you mean what you said?
Or was it all just a lie?

I cared more than i should've,
Devoted too much trust to you.
Why couldn't I see it?
It was too good to be true.

If you're thinking about talking to me,
You really mustn't.
I hate you for making me feel important,
When obviously I wasn't...

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  1. Date: 4/8/2011 6:57:00 AM
    Nice poem...Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/8/2011 5:52:00 AM
    I have stopped by to read your excellent poetry today Rae. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/7/2011 8:47:00 AM
    I can so relate to this!! Nice write, good expression. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2011 8:09:00 AM
    You sure conveyed such heartfelt feelings here, Rae --one can easily relate to this-- thanks for sharing-- btw I really like your name ;)