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You Don't Seem Sure

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You Don't Seem Sure

Am in doubt of what you feel
What you’ve shown me so far
Knowing you could give me more
I’m no longer sure who you are
I can’t believe what you told me
How I dread hearing those words
Giving me your thoughts in one motion
Everything just seems absurd
Why can’t I believe a word you say
Giving me that notion of deceit
Thinking about how much you love me
What we now feel is just until now obsolete
My dreams now feel empty
And my conscious drifts to a desolate place
I can’t seem to bare your lies
Can’t seem to look me in the face
And tell me you love me
These words knows no place in your heart
For you take me for granted
And that’s what tares me apart
No one likes to feel this way
The burden it fills inside
How you’ve forgotten about our love
How you’ve left it behind!

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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 10:18:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Felipe. I hope to get back soon to read more. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol