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Change damnit

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Change damnit

I tell myself to change,
I have to, I must,
I can't keep living this way,
It not to be trust

My hands are lame,
My brain scream, "Come on!"
What must I do?
Where did I go wrong?

These old habits
Are so hard to break,
So easy to fall onto,
Such a weak, weak
Mistake!

"You can do this!
Don't you want to change?"

"Why yes I do,
But it's such a hard effort to make!"

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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 5:45:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Qui Bee. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 5:59:00 PM
    Lovedly thoughts of expressions on change, Qui