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Celene Crescent
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Hai -C Dance of fire
Tango moon dancing salsa in mandarine sky
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/16/2012 3:02:00 PM
wow how cool this one short dollop of light..thanks for stopping by my verse Long Good Byes ..we all miss our kids..come write more on soup little one! Ma says so..;)
Ruben O.
Date: 4/26/2011 10:51:00 AM
I love your Hai-C! : ) Im going to steal this gorgeous third line! MWA!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/7/2011 11:34:00 PM
This is awesome, and I could see it in a magazine of modern haiku!
binibining P.iNk
Date: 4/7/2011 4:47:00 AM
oh gosh-- haha why did I suddenly crave for some salsa and chips?? heehee-- I think I am hungry?? Love how your moon tangos & does the salsa :) & love that name for this Hai-C -- haiku your way- how wonderful :) -- hugs to you :)
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 4/6/2011 8:00:00 AM
Sultry and steamy write Celene dear friend.. a lovely vision in every line to entice and excite.. we are all super ... hope u are the same.. my youngest is on active list waiting to hear if he is going to Libya yet... day by day we pray ... for peace everywhere so all troops can return to loving families.... so great to hear from u sweet friend.. luv..
jl sadberry
Date: 4/6/2011 7:47:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* Hai -C, that's so sweet my dear gifted and beautiful lady. = It causes myself to envision lovely sunsets while as standing upon the seashore, gazing into its colourfully painted and glorious horizons with that, the one you love; absolutely beautiful. == Your beauty is so very rare my dear and the light which flows from your loving eyes is ever so enchanting and, "Mesmerizing, 'In Beautiful.'" === love to you always, jasper
Celene Crescent
Date: 4/6/2011 6:22:00 AM
Hi James,i created this 'hai C ' for me,i doubt anyone would ever use it,though i'd love that if it ever happens :). .Hai-C (words with 17 sylables or less,think,taste,feel,see and splash the moment):)and tnx for your support.
Nick Bagnall
Date: 4/6/2011 5:16:00 AM
Nice imagery, you've certainly captured the warmpth.
James Peranteau
Date: 4/5/2011 3:38:00 PM
I'm smiling because of your comment here! And a fantastic write dear poet ! Are you telling me that you have entered a new form? That would be fantastic ! I hope to see souls here on the Soup incorperate this form into their writes soon. Have a great week ;) much love, james
James Fraser
Date: 4/5/2011 11:38:00 AM
It's certainly a sky that I would love to float through Celene, I love it.....:)
harry horsman
Date: 4/5/2011 12:45:00 AM
Beautiful tantalizing, modern Haiku. really enjoyed this. Harry
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/4/2011 3:03:00 PM
Your poetry is always so joyful, dear. I am not well. Since I couldn't send you the regular email I sent to other friends, I will copy it to a Soup mail for you. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Celene Crescent
Date: 4/4/2011 2:52:00 PM
Hai-C . .i love writing haiku,but sometimes ,till i check the cut,that there are no metaphors,that it is present,to check verbs. .i loose the feel,hear,touch of the moment. .so that's why i created Hai-C for me(A haiku with without rules ,17 sylables or less,think and splash :)
William Kershaw
Date: 4/4/2011 1:44:00 PM
Ahhhhhhh....April in the Mediterranean; it snowed here yesterday. Loved this one. Missed you. Love, Will
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/4/2011 12:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Celene. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
