Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

In the Dark

down here,
at the bottom of this well 
i found something.
in this chasm, 
so dark and deep
i located something i thought before 
to be impossible for me.
down here
despite all the dark
i located that pinprick of light
and although it is unattainable
it is there
and once i saw it 
i found hope
and the courage to go on

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:48:00 PM

    This poem excited my imagination. Thanks for the sliver of inspirational light! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/3/2011 5:20:00 AM

    Manouchika, I too found a pinprick of light though it has been several years ago now. That pinprick is now bright as the sun. All we need is to stay on the path. Very cool name BTW, mj

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 3:30:00 PM

    Very awesome and intrguing write finding a light of hope, Manouchka

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 3:26:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one ...Glad that you found a glimmer of home..Sara