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Written by: Doris Culverhouse

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Metal Cat Whirly Gig

Dizzy cat
Staggers and spins out of reach...
Birdie laughs mocking

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Caryl Ramsdale Date: 7/30/2011 6:42:00 PM Another wonderful Haiku which is one of my favorite poetry forms to create. Have a nice day filled with blessings! Caryl
Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2011 2:25:00 PM hope you are doing fine Doris,,, stopping by to wish you a happy mothers day... take care,..p.d.
Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. Date: 4/27/2011 1:19:00 PM Ha, enjoyed this!!
Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. Date: 4/27/2011 1:18:00 PM Ha, enjoyed this!!
Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 4/10/2011 11:13:00 AM seems like me funnies are rubbing off on you hehehe
Wilma Neels Date: 4/6/2011 7:03:00 AM This is so cute Doris :)
harry horsman Date: 4/5/2011 6:54:00 PM love this Doris, Harry
Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2011 9:15:00 PM love this fun haiku and the picture it creates.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/3/2011 2:46:00 PM very funny! Light & Love
Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/3/2011 7:35:00 AM So cute is this one!!! SO noce to see your name back up here.... Hope your well...luv Michael
Darren Garmer Date: 4/1/2011 8:40:00 PM I love this... Just like my cat Ninja :) Thank you for your kind words...
James Foulk Date: 4/1/2011 11:14:00 AM very cute little haiku, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my two hearts came together and for your comment
kash poet Date: 4/1/2011 7:05:00 AM Nice funny Haiku here Doris!Enjoyed--kashinath
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 4/1/2011 6:46:00 AM A funny picture indeed Doris.. cool and clever write my friend.. dizzy cat.. I have two that act this way many times.. enjoyed with luv..happy weekend ...hope all is welll luv..
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/1/2011 5:04:00 AM Another week has come and gone and I haven't been able to read as much this week as I had wanted. I am glad I was able to read your poetry today Doris. Keep your pen scrolling don't let the ink dry up. I hope you have a wonderful weekend of sunshine and joy and find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/31/2011 11:48:00 PM Oh,this is such fun, Doris. I can just see the birds laughing at it!
Constance La France Date: 3/31/2011 5:50:00 PM Very cute haiku, loved it~~
Timothy Brumley Date: 3/31/2011 4:40:00 PM Probably a mocking bird....literally:) I've actually seen this on many occasions, usually when a cat draws too close to the nest. You have Soup Mail!
Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/31/2011 4:10:00 PM unique, Doris so it doesn't look like you need help to be creative. you most certainly already are. Have been extra busy with work etc and it';s also garden time here! so plenty to do. Thanks for the comment and the howdy do!
daver austin Date: 3/31/2011 3:05:00 PM A metal cat - that is amusing. How about the birdie? Metal too? I have a bird clock above my sink. Now, I want a metal cat. Love, Dave
Dana'lynn Smith Date: 3/31/2011 2:43:00 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
Cherie Durbin Date: 3/31/2011 1:08:00 PM Adding your whimsical poem to my favorites, Doris!
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/31/2011 1:02:00 PM You have shown acute sense of observation in this haiku, Doris. I see after a long absence on PS
Sara Kendrick Date: 3/31/2011 12:49:00 PM That would be funny...Mom..
Francine Roberts Date: 3/31/2011 12:38:00 PM cute one Doris, made me smile
raskin bobbins Date: 3/31/2011 12:21:00 PM This is cute Doris.
Joe Maverick Date: 3/31/2011 12:19:00 PM Enjoyed the fun here in this write Doris.
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/31/2011 12:13:00 PM Very cute, Doris! Love, Carolyn

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