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Museum of Lost Souls

I sank my fragile being in delights of dew 

Waltz on cheeks of people, through mosaic of eyes 

I also whispered HIM, when He tried to rain 

My secret bits of wishes... returning to the fields 

 

I dove into abyss so to revive with grace 

and let my deer absorb me surviving drought of soul 

But Keeper of The Cage allows me only be 

A maze of salty traces on lifeless eyes of beads... 



for HGarvey Daniel Esquire's Contest "Personify A Tear "

written as a teenager and translated now ....

by: iolanda scripca
 


 


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  1. Date: 4/26/2011 4:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest Iolanda. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 1:12:00 PM

    Hey there Iolanda, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) hope your weekend will be a good one.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 12:07:00 PM

    Great to see you in the winner's list, Iolanda. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 11:10:00 AM

    Congrats Iolanda!Beautiful poem.-kash

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 4:31:00 AM

    congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Iolanda

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 10:18:00 PM

    Dear Iolanda, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 8th Place win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your beautiful poem and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 5:15:00 PM

    Good one..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 12:13:00 PM

    This is quite a moving write Iolanda, wishing you all the best with this gem, love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 10:13:00 AM

    Wow this is really good

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 7:21:00 AM

    Oh my goodness, Iolanda! you wrote this as a teenager??!!! You must have been born with a poem on your sweet lips...to have such a deep passion at such a young age...I am speechless!

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 4:12:00 AM

    Lovely personification of the tear in so few a verses, Iolanda