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Anatomy of a Cold

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Anatomy of a Cold

waves of chills within
achoo achoo cough cough cough
keep tissues handy

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  1. Date: 4/2/2011 9:43:00 PM

    i hate colds, but since i quit smoking in 1998 after 41 years of doing it, i hardly ever get a cold. but this poem takes me back to when i did. but it was a very cute little piece you wrote.

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 12:14:00 PM

    SOOO glad to hear the medication is helping you feel better, Carol. Thanks for letting me know. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 3:50:00 AM

    Just want you to know I'm pulling for a speedy recovery, Carol. Get lots of rest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 2:49:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 2:27:00 PM

    HOw clever and fun to read, Carol!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 1:23:00 PM

    Hey, "Sneezy," I hope you're feeling better today. Colds usually only last a few days. The flu takes its toll for weeks. Keep smiling -- do enjoy your sense of humor. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 12:18:00 PM

    That's a cold alright!! Jimmy

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:35:00 AM

    Nice humour here Carol.Enjoyed---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 9:46:00 PM

    Nice humor to an otherwise bothersome cold luv.. your lines so vibrant sound just like my husband this week.. achoo achoo ..cough cough..cough... fantastic .. at least u have a bit of humor about a bummer cold.. feel better my friend.. enjoyed with a smile..luv..

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 6:16:00 PM

    Hope it's not a personal cold coming on, Carol. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 4:48:00 PM

    Wittily told, Carol, but I do hate catching a cold. Usually only get the chills with a flu, but with both, there's the achoo, achoo... Hope you're not feeling a cold coming on. Enjoyed the humor! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 4:10:00 PM

    nice anatomy you have presented , carol