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What MITE be

I WANT YOU
 
You WANT ME

But, you DONT WANT to be TOGETHER

A FORBIDEAN LOVE that could NEVER be shared
  (sound nice in a way)

But, I stay AWAKE WOUNDERING, DREAMING, of what could have COME TO BE.

Only if we were ONE.

         You said 
       "ONE LOVE"
But WHO is the "ONE"?
 & WHO"S "LOVE"?
  YOUR"S or MINE?
          BOTH?

It's COMIING CLOSE
 Coming close to NOTHING
The clock it TICKING


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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 2:13:00 PM
    love is never easy! use the CAP'S sparsely because they are equated to yelling...your form is Free Verse and the title should read What Might be. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 3:21:00 PM
    Suspenseful poem, Brittany!