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Sandy

I had a friend ,, from long ago 
We were only young you know
She was my best friend
At least that's what I thought
We did everything together
I liked her a lot !

But then one day
I had to leave for school 
Though I wish I did not
Cause I missed her a lot
Then one day I came home 
When  I  called out to for her 
She did not answer  me
I looked for her high & low!  

But then I heard one day
From the TV news man
That she had met 3 bad men
And they took her away 
She is with the angels  now
For it could not  be any other way
And I know she waits for me 
Cause she was always that way !!!


I moved away from home, age 16, up to Oregon to get my degree in child psychology & teaching, come home at 18. had a dream that Sandy and I went to a house party "both of us age 18" then she went into another room with 3 men. So I stood there & knocked forever on the door. Sandy never came out.   This is a TRUE dream ! 

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:45:00 PM

    hmm, I am confused now. I am seeing a comment you made to Debs, and sounds like this was really true. But at the bottom of your story, it says it was just a dream? did she disappear or is it fiction?

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 2/25/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it's true,, I did have the dream ;}
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:44:00 PM

    Good idea doing a poem based on a dream. I have done a few that way. they can be pretty amazing. I enjoyed your story, sweetie.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:26:00 PM

    so sad!! Light & Love

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 12/5/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading Debbie ,,, Sandy was 18 as was I,,,,,,, when it happened .
  1. Date: 6/19/2011 6:30:00 AM

    No doubt you are correct in that assumption, Debbie. Death does not seperate friends... just puts off the meeting for a spark of time in the eternal order of things. nice tribute to your friend.

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 7:51:00 PM

    God, that is a tough ticket to punch! Wow! You have great faith and I admire you for it. I know that your friend does , too! i am glad that youliked my poem. I am Catholic, too, but, I took a different, but not sacrilegious approach. I am pleased that you like it! Thank you! Gerard. Best wishes.

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 10:04:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Debbie. Yes she will be waiting for you. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 5:51:00 AM

    *Hug*...that's all I have.

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 2:45:00 AM

    Sad write and one day you will see your friend again.