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Unfair game

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Unfair game

Beside the prison's bars stands my pride,
Holding the key to a road free.
Forgiveness planks floors to walk upon the rock
With soul flying against a momentum of hopes dying.
What trial could forgive, relieve the pain between my eyes?
The rules are set and I am playing to pay the debt
In a game unfair, in a game unfair.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:29:00 AM
    It is interesting and powerful. I'll read more of your poems. G.

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 7:22:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Valeria. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 4:26:00 PM
    Nice expressions with good images on the unfair game