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Bridge to Oblivion

steadily walking
toward stars of swirling light
darkness all around

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  1. Date: 3/24/2011 6:28:00 PM

    A wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 9:29:00 AM

    I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Brandee. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 7:06:00 AM

    Nice contrast between the light and darkness! The gilded sky is a beacon to march forward into the dark night. Good luck in Rick's contest!

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 1:56:00 PM

    Hi Bran, how are you? I like the steady walk of cross over.. so xool.. and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.