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Invitation to Mankind

Elements of space-
Galaxies spin on diamonds,
Beckoning mankind.

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  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/29/2011 2:08:00 PM
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    this is really cool, Ray!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 4/12/2011 4:39:00 AM
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    A wonderful write Ray .. good luck on your new book and much success.. so happy to see u doing something u so luv ... and enjoying the process of publishing too... keep us posted my friend... wishing u great sales and great success and always luv..
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 4/12/2011 4:04:00 AM
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    powerful. glowing write, ray.. much enjoyed! :) huggs, nette
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/8/2011 11:42:00 PM
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    wanted to thank you on your nice blog comment and when I can, I'll do a review on your book!
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    Roxanna Ressler
    Date: 4/5/2011 11:56:00 AM
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    i liked this (:
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    Dana'lynn Smith
    Date: 4/2/2011 4:55:00 PM
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    "Galaxies spin on diamonds" hmm I really love that.

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    Eiken Laan
    Date: 3/29/2011 10:46:00 AM
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    Ray, this is wonderful, congrats on your win.
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    kash poet
    Date: 3/29/2011 9:28:00 AM
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    Excellent imagery!Congrats Ray on your win---kashinath
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 3/28/2011 6:15:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ray! That colorful swirl of amazing light does seem to be beckoning. Always, Annalise
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 3/28/2011 1:05:00 PM
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    Spinning on diamonds!!!! How much I love that line....such a lovely description! Congratulations, Ray !!
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 3/28/2011 12:47:00 PM
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    Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest of Rick, Ray
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 3/28/2011 12:46:00 PM
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    Great use of the metaphor describing stars as "diamonds," Ray. For as long as I can remember, space has been beckoning our exploration. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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    john freeman
    Date: 3/28/2011 12:26:00 PM
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    Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Ray. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/28/2011 12:03:00 PM
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    Congrats Ray on your wonderful win in Rick's contest my friend and partner... elegant entry and excellent portrayal of the cool photo presented for the contest.. enjoy with luv..
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/28/2011 7:51:00 AM
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    Congratulations Ray on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 3/28/2011 7:49:00 AM
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    rare as a diamomd , indeed, ray!! CINGARS for the great win! :) huggs
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 3/26/2011 2:13:00 PM
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    Good luck in the contest with this very creative Haiku..Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/23/2011 2:37:00 PM
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    I sure love that spinning line, Ray. Good luck in the contest.
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 3/23/2011 11:53:00 AM
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    I love that middle line so much! Well done! Good luck Ray!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/23/2011 7:54:00 AM
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    I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Ray. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 3/23/2011 6:16:00 AM
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    You have interpreted and read well the picture, Ray


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