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dark thoughts

darkened moon
filthy room

five fast bullets
locked and loaded

perilous inches
from my head

fate is held
by my true loves' hand

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  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:17:00 PM
    Janetta - a very thought provoking write - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 6:58:00 PM
    Your true lovers hands holds that gun that hold your faith lol I loved it good write

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 6:51:00 PM
    Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 2:32:00 PM
    Haunting and brilliant all at once. Well deserved feature.

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 8:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 2:45:00 PM
    Hello Jannetta, congratulations my friend for having been featured this week. You are not the one who was in that plight, right? Just asking. Friend, Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 12:31:00 PM
    Ooooh hope this wasn't "for real" for you !! I've been in that "filthy room" and I'm so grateful I never have to live like that again and won't have a gun anywhere in my life ... smile ... you really got to me with this one, Janetta ... good time to get grateful ... smile ... congratulations on this real life write being a feature this week!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 8:17:00 AM
    Bad situation. Congratulations Janetta on "Dark Thoughts" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 10:49:00 PM
    This is a sad and frightening write, but very well written. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 5:27:00 PM
    This is one powerful write. Congrats on an awesome featured poem! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 3:20:00 PM
    A quater-finalist and now a featured poem. Congratulations! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen