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Mysticism

Deep uninterrupted meditations
Thoughts and imaginations going way deep
Through galaxies and celestial habitations
Failing to make the slightest of sounds as they creep

Seeking acquaintance with an omniscient being
An unprecedented level of closeness
With a Father never seen
And a Creator of unthinkable mysteries

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Mysteries are esoteric, divine and subtle. Congrats on reaching this stage

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Felix. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 1:23:00 PM

    ahh God...Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 9:46:00 PM

    Very nice - precise expression.

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 12:30:00 AM

    It is a great expression of meditation Felix. I wish you luck in the international PS contest. Dalila

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 7:45:00 PM

    Good one that is a testimony of your faith..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 8:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Felix. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 2:47:00 AM

    Beautiful Poem. Best wishes on this semi-finalist going on to the finals. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 8:18:00 AM

    Beautifully pensive Jen x

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 7:00:00 AM

    Very interesting poem and subject well explained. Congratulations on its display.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 3:00:00 AM

    Praise the Lord.How fascinating you make it sound, so little meaningless words used to describe a very huge,enormous,colossal,infinite eternal...unthinkable mystery. Surely this poems deserves to be posted and made one of my favorites. Makes me feel like meditating. Gidds

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 11:12:00 AM

    Thanks Carol... Truly well deserved...

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Felix. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 2:44:00 AM

    Thank you Dr. Ram for your comment. I believe this poem is a great piece by all standards

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 6:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Felix