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65 Needles

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65 Needles

Hopefully you see me
Im here deceiving
If there is no turning back
As i become one
And all power evolves
Im here to destroy you

My beautiful prize
The one i've drown for
That one i gave blood for
The one i sold everything for
This is the rising sun

I know you hear me
And is gone to the grave
Make it rain trough the nights passing by
Alone and accompanied
They walk among us
much disguised 
No one can see them
But everyone see me

My beautiful prize
The one i've drown for
That one i gave blood for
The one i sold everything for
This is a rising sun

Alone in the dark
With my devils besides me
The code is drowned 
My useless hands 
Enough to let me fall
In love with my future death
They are counted and overlooking at me
I know they are here
But i cannot understand
Hurry up and blow my head
Were is the air
Im sure alone

My beautiful prize
The one i've drown for
That one i gave blood for
The one i sold everything for
This is a rising sun
Beautifully deceived
Much to reject
I know is cold and lonely 
But better off alone than with the devil
Bring us the 65 needles.

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  1. Date: 3/20/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Ooo.. epic. Like a shooting spear... enjoyed it derick,.. have a great one...p.d.