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Goodbye

A thick wall surrounds your heart
As you say till death do us part
I know you believe we are in love 
A couple so divine, made by heaven above

But you don't let me in, and I'm all alone
Your heart never truly becomes my home
I wait and I wait, but things never change
You still seem oh so very strange

Now it's to late
You sealed our fate
So before I die
I bid you goodbye

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  1. Date: 3/22/2011 4:24:00 PM

    Thanks for ur kind words. This is not my experience, but my sympathy to people who have. I am sorry if anybody has had this terrible experience

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 8:12:00 AM

    so sad, recently had that sort of experience, but i was on the other end

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 6:57:00 PM

    Lovely and creative expressions, Raquel

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 4:50:00 PM

    great job this flows well