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Take Me Back

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Take Me Back

You promised you would never leave me you promised you would never go
So why do I feel like I’m being raped, raped of my heart and soul?
When I told you I loved you, I meant that so much
But when you said it to me, it must have just been muck
Because if you did love me, you would want us to last forever
You would take me back and let us be together.
When I talked about that, I really did think it would happen
Why do you think I would take that risk and show you what I kept hidden?
I have forgiven you before, for breaking my heart and much, much more
So why can’t you do the same for me, and put me out of this misery?
Let’s be together and forgive each other so we can have the future we both 
discovered
I am here waiting for you, until eternity because my heart wants no other just 
simply you.

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  1. Date: 3/19/2011 6:59:00 PM
    Creative and interestinf prose poetry, Aimee