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Drowning

I feel as though I'm drowning
in a non-existent sea
being thrown about by waves
that just wont let me be.

I try so hard to reach dry land
my breath to try and catch
but this tide is just too strong
for it I am no match.

This ocean keeps me choking
while it's hold gets ever tight
I feel as though I now exist
in some never ending fight.

But as this sea does drag me
into it's waters deep
I just add to what is drowning
with the rivers of tears I weep.

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  1. Date: 3/21/2011 2:25:00 AM

    This is dead on one of my Nightmares. Freaky! I like it!

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 4:10:00 AM

    Emotional write Emma and dramatic rhyme .. so enjoyed reading your creative write .. happy weekend luv..