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Written by: Stephen Petluk gentle fury

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moon lit

Silver moon glows bright
soft light tracing precious curves 
bright eyes sparkling
quiet mischief takes control
profound pleasure greets passion

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Annalise Brigham Date: 3/22/2011 11:31:00 AM Beautiful Tanka! "quiet mischief tends to take control in lovely scenes as this. Annalise
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 3/19/2011 6:28:00 AM Precious lines of this Tanka Stephen.. smoldering sensual lines too and that silver moon does it every time.. tonight the Moon is supposed to be the closest to the Earth in 18 years.. u could almost touch it luv.. hope u get a good view ...happy weekend...
Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/19/2011 1:18:00 AM A soft and romantic one, Stephen. Nicely done!
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/18/2011 1:53:00 PM There is something very special about lovers standing beneath the moonlight. It does seem to arouse are passions (and I look better in dim light LOL). I really like your tanka, especially the alliteration in the last line. Beautiful work, Stephen. There will be a full moon Saturday night and I'll be staring up at it from the beach. Love, Carolyn
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/18/2011 1:05:00 PM You have penned beautiful images for the moon lit, Stephen
Tobey Hill Date: 3/18/2011 12:11:00 PM nice write..TAH

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