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blood is thinker than water
that leaves me under the bridge
i as what is the matter
i don't mean any thing
gold is more presious blood
silver more solid then blood
all i want is your undieing love
with blessings sent from up above
the blood flows slow
glod will stay shiny and never grow bold
silver will tarnished but still can be shined
and never will get spiritually old
i am water would i not quench your thirst
i am woman wouldn't i come first
i don't want you to leave your blood
never in a day.. but water can be controled
and not let the flood take it away
you can go with your blood, i will find my own way
hoping to flow with a flood that wont stray
im not thicker then blood, of this i'm aware
knowing you leave me for your people and leave me scared
i could never compare, and at the drop of a dime you will me
so unaware,
blood is thicker then water, and water i choose to be
i will never flow slow, but flood with love and blessings 
sent from up above...
 I AM WATER...

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  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:50:00 PM
    Very beautifully written poem. Like it a lot

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 12:27:00 PM
    I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Rose. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 1:46:00 PM
    Very interesting Diane... and how are you by the way? And yes I see why u choose water... great element by the way... we can't do with out... loved it.. have a nice saint Patty*s day