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Stick to HIS rules, HE not Human actually rules

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Stick to HIS rules, HE not Human actually rules

( On backdrop of current JAPAN tragedy. 
Dedicated to all who lost lives and property in worst devastation ever. 
Our sincere prayers for their salvation, succour to surviving victims, early rehabilitation)

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Hiroshima, Nagasaki, Fukushima
Nuclear destination, bombing and self-explosion
Human rant, God is just name for chant
Reign human invention, HE just mythological sovereign

God disliked apathy, shelved sympathy
thought to teach lesson, venue selected Japan
Quake, Tsunami, Fire, Radioactive leak, wreck plenty
65 seconds flat, venue littered with death float

Humans abuse Nature, expect HIM to spare, care  
HIS justice, a show reality sans court, hearing or attorney 
HE delivers salvation to devastation, superpower to roadside pauper
Avoid HIS wrath, stick to HIS rules, HE not Human actually rules      

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Hitendra Mehta
March 2011

For Members Contest –   The Rhyme Inside by Debbie Guzzi
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  1. Date: 4/16/2011 1:00:00 PM
    Yes there is a lot in this Hitendra,i have contemplated similar to this myself.. and as i ponder the (viewpoints?) i think you have touched on some truths, and am refreshed by your honesty, it is high time to air such views..we all need to see the bigger picture!

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 7:18:00 PM
    Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy poem's honered success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 11:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Hitendra in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 10:15:00 AM
    Wow! This one goes to my favorites, Hitendra. What an interesting perspective on the reasons behind the disaster that hit Japan. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 4:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Hitendra

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 9:42:00 PM
    wow, very intense poem on God and calamities, Hitendra! Congrats on your HM.

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 9:01:00 PM
    A beautiful tribute to these very resilient people. Warm congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 7:50:00 PM
    Congrats Hitendra on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry .. superbly fitting the theme of the contest my friend.. enjoy yur very special honor with luv.. hoping u are doing well luv..

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 7:08:00 PM
    powerful message conveyed. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 10:49:00 PM
    so intense i could feel the tragedy, hitendra... great inner rhyming as well... winning wishes to you.. how are you?? :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 7:13:00 AM
    I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup this morning. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Hitendra. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 4:51:00 PM
    beautiful inside rhyme unforced and meaningful on the recent event , Hitendra. A piece of beauty

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 7:29:00 AM
    Deeply stirring write and entry Hitendra my friend.. our prayers continually sent to Japan and it's residents luv.. amazing recollection of events and disasters plaguing these people in years gone by and currently ... humans abuse nature.. excellent line.. good luck in the contest luv..