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Slamming dakarai cobb part 2 of part 5

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Slamming dakarai cobb part 2 of part 5

 continued from part 1

dakarai says I lost all the slam battles I faced with Nate, Ryan, and P.D.
Is he seriously dumb as a box of rocks, or is it just the way he writes his poetry?
dakarai "news flash," you bum, did you ever read Nate, or Ryan's "no-meter rhyme?"
I had P.D. sucking my sugar plum, and Nate and Ryans slam was a poetic crime!

dakarai soupers can easily go back and read, so why blatantly lie?
Maybe in "your" confused "little head," these poets beat the poetic samurai.
dakarai why do I need to remind you what I did? - Didn't "you" call me an "Afro 
samurai?"
I'm more poetically inclined than Billy the Kid, and because of your "prejudices" you 
think I'd cry?

dakarai surprise! I'm not "black," I'm Hispanic and white!
I wish this could be more than a poetic attack, because whipping your sissy azz 
would feel so right!
dakarai that's right, I want to physically fight - I wonder would you meet me in the 
street?
You poetic parasite, my fist will be all you physically eat!

dakarai can you feel your toes as I close - I have your whole body numb like 
novacain.
After you die and begin to decompose, I'll feed you to wolfrats to entertain!
dakarai your slams I shouldn't entertain, my fellow soupers expect more out of me.
But I fed you my poetic cocaine, now I have you addicted to my poetry!!

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  1. Date: 3/17/2011 7:38:00 AM
    Look jail bait! Oops, I mean jail bird! You are the last person on the soup who needs to be trying to give someone lessons about respect. I am sure that your cell block is full of respectful citizens. Anyone who has a problem with what I said can voice it to me. If they don't understand or like slam, then they don't need to waste time commenting on it. I have as much of a right to express myself however I please, whether it be in a slam or a comment. So, thanks but no thanks for the advice.

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 10:02:00 AM
    I have no idea wot comment you are referring to Jimmy? Care to enlighten me about these insults I said to your lady friend? Funny how you point your finger at me, claiming harm done by insult, when you hurl your very own. My glass house was smashed long ago, so keep on judging me little man.

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 9:19:00 AM
    My poetry, my contest record speaks for itself..but you need to have respect for some of these older women on here for they do not understand slam! If you can't respect them (from your comments) then remove your sorry lame ass from the site..and tell your boyfriend Chris to put down his pom-poms and be a man..I don't like the comment he made to my lady friend...Later punk! JA

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 9:16:00 AM
    dakarai..hey little poet boy... lol....Being in prison these last 8 yrs I'm able to read and analize people pretty good..you lack attention dakarai..seriously your whole world "lit-up" when I slammed you! lol I'm not really a "slammer" I am a poet of the heart, of struggle..not use to writing fairy tales...I live in a world where you have to "fight" or be someone's bitch! And well...a "bitch" I am not! There's no doubt in my mind I'm one of the best poets on this site....(continued)