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Destination Unknown

jet vapours long trail
arc across late afternoon sky
plane just a speck now

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  1. Date: 3/22/2011 2:24:00 PM

    thankxx Carol .. always luv your warm and welcome comments ... glad u enjoyed my write on the value of poetry luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 9:47:00 AM

    Thought-provoking, Carol. When we look up and see those jets overhead, we often wonder where they're bound. Really enjoyed the imagery in this haiku. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 6:02:00 PM

    Grand imagery and visually energetic Carol.. wonderful words depicting the elements surrounding the plane.. enjoyed and thankxx for your wonderful comment on my Easter contest entry luv..

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 1:37:00 PM

    Nice observation on the jet's flight, Carol

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 10:27:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry this today Carol. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2011 3:29:00 PM

    ooh,I LIKE this. VERY nice, Carol!!